MA Ray
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Post by MA Ray on Jun 23, 2012 13:14:07 GMT -5
Alright so I created a new logo for The Caged Dojo on KW's request. This is what I have so far. I hope KW can see this and help me suggest or improvise any details. Also, I was hoping anybody on here as well could give their suggestions too and I will definitely put that into consideration. So what do you think? Attachments:
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Keyboard Warrior
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Post by Keyboard Warrior on Jun 23, 2012 20:30:49 GMT -5
It looks good man. A few things. I'm not crazy about the color scheme. If we could change the both the titles and the Torii gate to being red, I think that will make it stick out more, in my opinion. I'm also not terribly crazy about the TMAists and MMAists Welcome part. I'd like to try and achieve saying this, with just our logo, which is our symbol, the torri gate, behind a cage.
Those are just my thoughts man. I like it alot, and I do mean all of my opinions to be taken merely as constructive criticism.
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Post by friendlyvirus on Jun 23, 2012 20:51:36 GMT -5
dunno, doesn´t look good to me, i like the one is at use better.
seems like very paint made, needs something giving it more texture.
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MA Ray
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Post by MA Ray on Jun 23, 2012 22:27:12 GMT -5
I like the suggestions, KW and I fixed them. I think we need something else too though to add. Something to make it stand out. Any advice? Attachments:
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MA Ray
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Post by MA Ray on Jun 23, 2012 23:24:57 GMT -5
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MA Ray
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Post by MA Ray on Jun 23, 2012 23:25:25 GMT -5
Modifications with no fence. Attachments:
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Post by jwbulldogs on Jun 24, 2012 1:03:04 GMT -5
It looks good, but I notice something missing. I think when KW had the vision to create this part of the vision was to give TMA a venue as well as give the sports a venue to talk about their training and arts.
One one side he shows a caged fighter. On the other side he has the traditional martial artist hence the name "Caged" / "Dojo". I think he used the term dojo as being universal. Most people know the term dojo. But there are other terms that are used depending on the style or culture where you get your training.
I don't know all of the terms for every art, but the most commonly one know is dojo.
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MA Ray
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Post by MA Ray on Jun 24, 2012 1:28:04 GMT -5
Modified. Any more suggestions? Attachments:
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Post by Chef Samurai on Jun 24, 2012 1:35:36 GMT -5
Modified. Any more suggestions? It's nice but I think it would look cooler if the red thing in the middle was the entrance to the cage.
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MA Ray
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Post by MA Ray on Jun 24, 2012 2:28:07 GMT -5
Tell me what you think. Edited a bit more. Attachments:
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MA Ray
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Post by MA Ray on Jun 24, 2012 2:32:49 GMT -5
One without the reflection. Attachments:
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MA Ray
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Post by MA Ray on Jun 24, 2012 2:38:34 GMT -5
Took out lens flare. Attachments:
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MA Ray
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Post by MA Ray on Jun 24, 2012 3:11:17 GMT -5
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MA Ray
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Post by MA Ray on Jun 24, 2012 3:31:59 GMT -5
Banner for homepage. Attachments:
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